The opinion of another LOTF student:
Well I have recently finished studying LOTF for english lit(had the exam the other week) and can say I thought this was pretty good, a nice overview of the chapter. The character designs were really good (especially Piggy) but a little more character movement would have been nice, the tended to remain in a rigid position and just have their arms flail around.
The added humour was pretty good, you squeezed a laugh out of me with the "I got the fiyyaaa!" line
Overall this was nicely put together (and i would presume you managed to do it in little time if it was for school) with suiting character and background drawing. congratulations